Bro Glo
Be A Man With A Natural Looking Tan
The whole ad is aimed by this one line. Self-tanner is a category men are quietly embarrassed to shop in, so the headline hands them permission before it hands them a product. It does not sell tanning; it removes the reason not to buy tanning.
Tired of the pasty white look? Don't want to lay in the sun for hours? Use Bro Glo Sunless Tanner.
Two questions, and both are enemies rather than benefits. The pale look is the thing you already dislike; the afternoon in the sun is the alternative you already rejected. The product arrives as the only door left, in one sentence, with no feature list.
Shop now → the product page, with Free Shipping over $75 in the link description
Straight to the product, not to an article. The free shipping threshold does the work of an upsell before the click: $75 is more than one bottle, so the basket size is being set in the ad.
The part worth stealing
Bro Glo ran three different bodies under the same headline, all inside the same 516 days. One opens on the enemy, one answers the objection (Does that mean you have to live with a pale body? Not a chance.), one leads with ease of use (This easy to apply foam is the answer to pasty skin). Two of the three carry the same concrete proof: won't streak or stain clothes and sheets.
That is a hook held fixed while the body is tested against it. It is the cheapest real test there is, because the expensive decision, the one that determines who stops scrolling, has already been made and is not being disturbed.
Almost nothing. A pale arm, the foam going on, and a white shirt or a bed sheet staying clean, because that last one is the claim doing the persuading. Three clips, then the same three assembled against one headline three different ways.